I am not sure why the heck you have an ironguard in there, that item is ONLY good with supports.
I am also not a fan of tension bow with a crystal build, maybe tb aftershock then shatterglass, your burst items should always be first.

Dont worry, any feedback is good.
Its all depends on the play style & timing, RichRulez. I'm doing fine with this build and at one time i ranked Bronze pinaccle of awesome from 8 winning streak with this build as well.
Infusion is crucial here, if you feel ganked a lot then wait for your tank to initiate the fight then you go FOCUS on celeste deal damage as much as you can then kaku even is she has aegis & crucible with my build+crystal infusion you can damage her more than 85% then kaku away and target her again.
If you think she damage you too much, forget the aftershock priority and get Aegis instead (be flexible). If still she does so much damage, get crucible/fountain. Using this build i hardly hardly get 2 defense items, focus burst as much damage, kaku to nearest bush, wait cool down burst again. And PolarInertia suggestion is very good for this build. Moreover, this burst build in fact soloing purpoe, most ganking build is weapon, mine hybrid burst.

Okay so as much as I'm all for this and not trying to knock your guide but this sh*t don't work. I kept wondering how when I play with taka I kept getting raped. Taka is supposed to do massive damage and I'm talking solo not ganking ppl. So I tried this with me and a friend in practice. I barely cracked his health and this is been happening in a lot of games I can't even one shot Celeste. So now I gotta go back to the drawing board.

Thanks, will do! i think other builds focus too much on weapon damage mostly. I like this because you can just jump out and surprise people! the only thing i would maybe change is more focus on cooldown regeneration time in there. I take your build and add the clockwork item.

Thanks PolarInertia for your feedback, i would suggest buying crystal infusion straightaway right after level 12 AND having shatterglass. This will immensely increase your burst.
**Moreover, enemy team might havent build aegis yet during this stage.

Great guide, tried so many and this is by far the best build and demonstration. Like the way it focus' on priorities of the items as well. That is very important! great job, thanks again.